Sincerely

In the hush before the storm of words,

Two hearts arrive – late, bruised, half-wild

Carrying the ash of other fires.

The beautiful wreckage of once-upon-a-times

That ended in quiet doors closing.

Yet here we stand,

Not as echoes of who we loved before,

But as two separate inks

Suddenly aware of the same page.

You tilt your head at the same slant of light

That makes a line shiver:

I catch my breath when your metaphor

Lands like a hand on the small of my back.

We speak the same rare dialect-caesura, stanza, the long ache

Of a dash that refuses to reslove.

And oh, the thrill of it –

The shared fever for the unsaid,

The way our pens hover together

Above white fields that have never known

Our particular shade of hunger.

I am giddy with the nearness of

What isn’t written yet:

Stanzas still sleeping in the marrow,

Kisses shaped like questions,

Nights when we will read each other aloud

Until the metaphors bleed into morning.

We are not erasing the past loves-

They taught us the grammar of longing-

But we are turning, together, toward a new syntax.

A syntax trembling with possibility,

Electric with the promise of every poem still waiting

To be born between us.

Let the ink run.

Let the anticipation crackle like static

Before the first shared line.

I am already breathless for

Whatever beautiful disaster we are about to write.

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  1. New blog beginnings | The Creative Chic Avatar

    […] incredible blogging community can mean so much to someone just starting out. You can find Michael hereThank you all for always being so supportive and kind. I cannot wait to watch his blog grow and see […]

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    1. 10Past10 Avatar

      I am eternally grateful for your support and encouragement. I truly would not have the blog without you. Your generous sharing of my blog with your followers is such a lovely gift. Thank you for everything!!

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  2. Christopher Hall Avatar

    The Creative Chic sent me here! I’m very excited to see your writing journey here unfold! I can already tell that I will enjoy your writing style, because this was so wicked good! 👍🏻

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    1. 10Past10 Avatar

      Welcome here and The Creative Chic is a wonderful ambassador of all things good. I truly appreciate your compliments and look forward to sharing more. Writing is boundless when it comes to expressing our emotions whether lived or dreamed. I am happy to share with you.

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  3. pamperrault21 Avatar

    Hi Michael! I’m Pam and I LOVE poetry. I hope you don’t mind but I’ll be joining you on your blog journey and I’m really looking forward to what you might share with us.

    This poem is truly beautiful – you must be very proud of it! Two lines resonated particularly and I’ve read the poem a few times now:

    “I am giddy with the nearness of What isn’t written yet:” – Chills!

    and

    “I am already breathless for Whatever beautiful disaster we are about to write.” What a perfect ending.

    Thank you for sharing “Sincerely” with us. Best of luck on your blog voyage – I just know you’ll do amazingly well.

    pp

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    1. 10Past10 Avatar

      Thank you, Pam, for your very kind words. I am happy to share it, but there is always a leap of courage when sharing what comes from the heart, so your highlighting and taking time to read several times is appreciated tremendously.

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  4. Jacque Avatar

    I’m so happy you’re here. The lovely Jenn (The Creative Chic) is how I found you. Welcome to the family. 🤍

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    1. 10Past10 Avatar

      Thank you for your warm welcome and we certainly share in our fandom of Jenn. Writing is such a beautiful art form and I am thrilled to be sharing mine with you.

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  5. The Creative Chic Avatar

    Wow, first, congratulations on your blog! I am beyond thrilled you are here and to be on this beautiful, creative journey with you. 

    This poem feels like the moment two people realize they are emotionally and creatively fluent in the same language. What stood out most to me is that it does not treat past love as failure. Instead, those experiences become part of what prepared them to recognize each other. “They taught us the grammar of longing” is such a powerful line because it turns heartbreak into something meaningful rather than something wasted.

    I also love how writing becomes the language of intimacy throughout the poem. Ink, syntax, stanzas, and metaphors all blur the line between creativity and desire. The connection between what you feel intellectually, emotionally, and physically all at once.

    What makes the poem especially moving is its sense of anticipation. It is less about what the relationship already is and more about the beautiful possibility of what it could become. The ending captures that perfectly, embracing both the risk and excitement of beginning something new together.

    Incredible writing!

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    1. 10Past10 Avatar

      *picks jaw up off of the floor

      What a powerfully touching comment. I am so grateful for your encouragement and look forward to this journey.

      Your interpretation of the poem is absolutely in sync with my intent as well. It’s like our thoughts are holding hands, themselves. Yes, there is very much a recognition rather than a discovery of commonality between the narrator and his muse. Also, the past relationships are viewed as valuable lessons in the shaping of the current relationship. Regret has no place in this piece as it is steeped in optimism. An optimism that you instantly recognized, yourself.

      Again, thank you.

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  6. P. J. Gudka Avatar

    Welcome to the blogging world, here from The Creative Chic’s blog to say hi.

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    1. 10Past10 Avatar

      Thank you for that, indeed. And a ‘Hi’ back to you. I am grateful you answered her invitation. And I am grateful for her extending the invitation.

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      1. P. J. Gudka Avatar

        You’re most welcome, enjoy blogging.

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  7. Cindy Georgakas Avatar

    Hey Michael,

    Exquisite metaphors in your words… I see why Jennifer loves you so… she has the same remarkable style. She’s a master! Have fun blogging and welcome to our community.

    Warmly,

    💕

    Cindy

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