Together

 

The night stretches empty without you,

a wide silence that threatens behind my eyes.

I stand at the window, city lights too far,

your absence a quiet weight I carry in my chest.

Stars scatter above like distant signals,

cold and steady, refusing to bend.

I search their scattered light for any trace of you,

a flicker that might cross the miles between us.

My thoughts drift outward,

reaching across dark fields and sleeping towns,

hoping the same sky that covers you

might carry this longing back in return.

Don’t let go of my hand.

Even the stars feel incomplete tonight,

their quiet shine missing the warmth

of your heart reflecting them.

When you return, the stars will form their familiar constellations again

All guiding our hearts on their sublime path:

Together. 

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  1. The Creative Chic Avatar

    Your poem transforms the night sky into a powerful symbol of love, distance, and enduring connection. I am drawn to the way the stars serve as both a reminder of separation and a source of comfort, linking two hearts beneath the same vast expanse. 

    This line, “I search their scattered light for any trace of you” beautifully captures the universal experience of longing for someone who is far away. I particularly loved the closing image of the stars reforming into familiar constellations, suggesting that love has the ability to restore meaning, direction, and a sense of wholeness. 

    Your writing balances tenderness and melancholy beautifully, leaving the reader with a feeling that even across great distances, true connection remains unbroken. It’s a heartfelt and evocative piece that lives in the mind long after reading. Just so beautifully intimate. 

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  2. poeticmobility Avatar

    Awesome poem and good usage of words

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    1. 10Past10 Avatar

      Thank you so much. Very glad you enjoyed it.

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      1. poeticmobility Avatar

        You’re welcome

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