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Flawed

In the quiet hours, I see you fully—

not polished, but real, edges raw.

Your words sometimes cut too sharp,

your mornings heavy with doubt,

yet I lean closer,

because that fire proves you are alive.

Flaws weave through us like stubborn roots—

forgotten promises, long silences,

habits that snag and pull.

I do not erase them.

I learn their shape.

Love is not a clean line.

It is the whole shore, tide-washed and cracked,

and I gather every grain of sand.

When doubt clouds your eyes or walls rise high,

I wait outside, steady,

knowing the same heart holds me gently at night.

You are not marble to worship.

You are living sculpture, chipped by time,

and every mark catches the light differently.

I choose you—flawed, flickering, brilliant—

exactly as you are.

My heart keeps choosing,

simple as breathing.

There is no you without me.

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8 responses to “Flawed”

  1. This is absolutely breathtaking. “You are not marble to worship. You are living sculpture, chipped by time”. What a gorgeous, profoundly honest way to describe loving someone in their entirety. There is so much grace in the idea of choosing to learn the shape of someone’s flaws rather than trying to smooth them out or look away from them. The imagery of the tide-washed shore is incredibly striking; it captures that rare, unconditional sanctuary where someone is allowed to be messy, heavy, and human all at once. You’ve beautifully articulated the quiet courage it takes to stand steady outside someone’s walls, and that final line lands with such a powerful, definitive ache.

    A truly stunning piece of writing. Also, it’s so lovely to see you posting again. Never stop writing. Ever.

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    1. Your reply is so wonderful. I appreciate your encouragement both directly at the end and indirectly with your compliments.
      Your insight and your sharing your interpretations about my words is cherished.
      There is much to be said about loving someone as they are and not “editing” our loved ones. Because in that case we are not loving. We are loving a version of them.
      Thank you, Jenn. For everything

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    2. When we cast our eyes upon something that is proportionate or follows the golden ratio (1.61) of divine proportion…in an odd way it’s easier not to see it. Because it looks “normal” or as it should…particularly in nature. But it’s when something is out of proportion or balance that it stands out…usually to criticism. This is us and our flaws. They stand out.

      But they also make us unique. To have someone see your perceived flaws…appearance, habits, tendencies, etc., and they still love you…that is the most powerful validation of both you, and the relationship.

      I am fortunate to have someone who loves me like this. If you find yourself as one of the lucky ones, hold on to it. It was always meant for you.

      And thank you, Sincerely, for your encouragement.

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  2. This poem is so simple and beautiful at once! I feel somehow happy and melancholic at once, what is this that you have done to me?

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    1. Much of life and its experiences need more than one emotion to describe the scope of its impact on us. For you to have felt these diametrically opposed emotions is the highest of compliments. The poem acknowledges the imperfections or what could be melancholic, but it also celebrates the beauty and what could bring us joy.

      Thank you for reading, responding, and, above all, feeling.

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    1. Thank you for visiting, reading, and commenting. I hope very much to see you often.

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      1. You’re welcome and certainly will do, feel free to check out mine as well

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